A song for you,Dady...

I couldn't live, I couldn't live without your love
For one kiss, well I'd give everything up
There's no words that can describe
What I feel deep inside so I let this song say it all

Then I hope you'll understand
Once you've listened till the end

Heard the music in my head
So before I could forget
I start singing, yeah I was singing
This song for you, just made up the words...

When He Loved Me

when my father loves me,everything was beautiful..every hours we spent together lives within my heart..
and when he was lonely,i was there to comfort him and i knew that he loved me..
through the summer and the fall we had each other that was all,just he and i together like it was meant to be...
so the years went by,i stayed the same but he began to drift away,i was left alone..still i waited for the day when he'd say i'll always love you...
lonely and forgotten i'd never thought he look my way,then he smiled at me held me just like he used to....like he loved me....when he loved me....

my dearest dad..i love you forever...
satu2nya fotoku bersama ayah...
hanya ini yang bisa kulihat disaat terakhirnya...aku sayang ayah....

Ayah,Dennis sayang ayah...dennis kangen ayah....

Tugas Synopsis English

 

   Speaking English Assignment

   Dennis Agista

   EBII 11220423

          Task   :

          1. Resume The Stories!

          2. Analyze errors grammatical of the stories!

          3. Retell the stories with your own way and Compare it!

PREFACE

        For the first time I would to say thank you to Allah .Swt and our beloved Lecturer Mr.Dasep Supriadi who gives us this assignment.

Two weeks ago our speaking Lecturer turning three videos to us which stories played by Banjaran  Junior  High School Students.

He gave us an assignment to make the synopsis of each story and analyze an error grammatical.

My name is Dennis Agista I’m really sorry I couldn’t  summary  the story completely, actually I couldn’t get a lot of information from the stories because that time I sat  behind so I couldn’t see and hear the dialogue clearly but I would try to do this task  perfectly by using a little information that  I got two weeks ago .  

        I’m so sorry if there’s so many flawed in my synopsis and analysis .I really need your critical and advice to build and improve my English ability.

 

                                                                                                            Sincerely

                                                                                                                                        

                                                                                                        Dennis Agista

 

  Speaking English Assignment

  Dennis Agista

  EBII 11220423

   SYNOPSIS I ( First Story  )

   Title               : What’s wrong with me?

   Played by      :  Banjaran Junior High School Students

  

   Main Characters : Isni and Feby

   Supporting Characters : Zikri ,Dani ,Naufal ,Dahlia and Mia

   Synopsis

 

What’s wrong with me?

      

        Part One (Orientation)

        Isni was a Junior high school student .She was very rich and always got everything that she wanted. her parents spoiled her everyday and it makes her become an arrogant and conceited person .Day by day Isni was more conceited, She always thought  that She had anything and no one could compared her.        

       Part Two (Complication)

       One day her mother rent an employee to be a house keeping in her home, her name was Feby .She was same age as Isni but she was very kind and diligent everybody like and loved her personality. Contrary Isni was very lazy and annoy She always protested her mother and command by yelling to Feby. She was really jealous and hated to her.

       Part Three (Resolution)   

       One day Dani one of  Isni ’s  friend  called  her on the telephone ,he said that he and his friends Zikri , Naufal, Dahlia and Mia wanted to do the task from the teacher together at her home. Isni agreed with that idea so she invited all of her friends to make the assignment at her house.

As a Usually Isni showed her conceited behavior to her friends .She did everything as she wanted .She ordered them to do her task while they could only shake of their head.

Isni offered her friends to drink and called Feby to serve the beverage ,She yelled and grumbled to her then Feby came and served the beverage to her friends on the table after that Isni threw her griped to her again and command her to went away.

Dani and friends felt concerned to Feby and asked to Isni why she was very cruel and hated to Feby and what’s wrong with her? Isni answered that She was very jealous to her because She loved by many people and her mother always compared her with Feby actually She felt underpressure.

Dani and friends said to her that being cruel and evil wouldn’t solve the problem then they asked her for asking forgiving to Feby. She called Feby and asked forgave to her Feby accept it then she smiled at her and finally they lived together happily ever after.     

                                                                       

           

 Speaking English Assignment

  Dennis Agista

  EBII 11220423

   Error Grammatical Of The Story

  

   Actually I couldn’t find any Error Grammatical of the first story which title was “What’s wrong with me“

 Here’s some of my reason    

 First       : I sat behind when the video of story was turning.

 So I couldn’t see and hear the dialogue clearly.

 Second   : There’s no Dialogue text script so I couldn’t analyze an error grammatical in the story.

 Third      : I will replace Grammar analysis in this session with an analysis in another story.    

 Conclusion and moral values

  “Being cruel and evil wouldn’t solve your problem“

  “ If  you always think that you are the best you will always stuck in your lonely world”

  “Spoiled your child too much will make them become conceited person”

 

   Here I write There parts of the story They are 
   1.Orientation

    Orientation is a first part of the story, It tell us about an introduction of the story.  Who were involving at the story, the Main Characters and the characters and also when and where it happened. 

   2.Complication

     Complication is the second part of the story. It’s the part when the problem has begun.

   3.Resolution 

     Resolution is the third part of the story. It’s the part when the characters find a solution to solve their problem.

     I get a conclusion that the stories majority are Narrative text because based on my analysis there were        Orientation, Complication and Resolution  in that stories.

     I Retell the stories again by using simple past tense because I changed the video format to the text format so I must change all of things that I have watched two weeks ago to the past form.

     

  Speaking English Assignment

  Dennis Agista

  EBII 11220423

   SYNOPSIS I (Second Story)

   Title               :  Playing together at Yudith’s House (Based on my own)

   Played by      :  Banjaran Junior High School Students

  

   Main Characters : Yudith,Usep,Yoga,Asep,Givar

   Supporting Characters : Deri,Taswan and Mus

   Synopsis

Playing Together at Yudith’s House

 

        Part one (Orientation)

       One day a bunch of Children were gathering in some place and they were singing together they sang the “Peterpan song” happily suddenly Usep ,one of them said that he was very boring and asked to their friends for playing together at Yudith’s house .

 “Guys,What about if we play to Yudith’s house? ” said Usep

 “ That would be Great ! “ said  the others. Then they went to Yudith’s house.

        Part Two (Complication)

        They arrived at Yudith’s house but Yudith didn’t out so Usep and Yoga called him   loudly “Yudith come out and play, please!” then Yudith came out and said

 “Hi guys what’s up?”

 “May we play in your house?” Usep asked him

 “Sure come in!” Yudith replied it.

They played together at Yudith’s house .His house was very harmoniously chic, there were many kind of plants and leaves tree. Yudith   asked his friends to entered his house and they gathered in the guest room while one of his friends felt very thirsty so he asked a drink to him “Can we have a glass please! “

Then Yudith replied it “Of Course you can “He went to the kitchen to make the beverage. Yudith and friends had played and sang inside his house now it’s time to play outside. They went outside and played in the Yudith’s garden.

There were many kind of plants and trees in his garden but only one plant that made his friends really interested it was The Guava tree. It seems that the fruits had been ripe so his friends wanted to pluck that fruits. Usep was climbing the tree he raised his hand to pick the ripe Guava fruits ,he could get many fruits ,he was very happy and yelled like a Tarzan However  there was a problem after that Usep was really scared to went down .         

        Part Three (Resolution)

        “Don’t worry Usep. We will Catch You Please jump!“ said others     

“Ok no problem I have a thin boy guys“ said Usep

Yudith was really scared if something bad would happen to Usep so he banned him to jump.

 “Don’t jump Usep! It’s really Dangerous “said Yudith

 “So what should I do?” asked Usep

 “Wait a moment! I will borrow the ladder from my neighbor. Come on guys! “Yudith asked others to help him took the ladder in his neighbor house.

Finally they brought the ladder and Usep could go down safely and then they were laughing together suddenly Yoga’s cell phone rang and he answered it, his mother spoke over there asked him to go home. Then Yoga asked permission to Yudith

 “I have to go home, Yudith “said Yoga

 “We have too “said his other friends

 “Ok Take care” Said Yudith

 Then they went home together, it was really beautiful day.

       

  Speaking English Assignment

  Dennis Agista

  EBII 11220423

   Error Grammatical Of The Story

  

    I found some of Error Grammatical when I saw this video of the story that title

 “Playing together in Yudith’s house“   here is some of that   :

  

    First :  I  Found something strange in the sentence “ Can we have a glass, please! “

 I think that sentence it’s rather use, we often use

 “Could you bring me a drink, please! “                                  

  When we are asking for something, we rather use “Can we have“.

    Second : I heard that someone of this story said “ Ok no problem , I have a thin boy guys“ actually I didn’t know what  did it mean , maybe he wanted to say that he had  a thin body so his friends would be easier to catch him but I think he’s wrong said .

It should be “ Ok , no problem I  have a thin body “ not  “ I have a thin boy “ if he wanted to say that he was a thin  boy, he just say “ I’m a thin boy “ .

     Third : At the end of the story Yudith said to his friends “Ok Take care“  it’s really made me confused and asked “What must be take care?“ The word “Take care“ must be reverse to something that they want to keep and care, I think Yudith is  better to say
 “Be careful“ .

    Conclusion and moral values

 

    “We must help each other”

   “Friends are place where you can express yourself”

   “Something that you think trivial maybe the Dangerous things that make you get an accident so be careful ! ”

  Speaking English Assignment

  Dennis Agista

  EBII 11220423

   SYNOPSIS I (Third Story)

   Title               :  Funny Interview by Sukri’s show (Based on my own)

   Played by      :  Banjaran Junior High School Students

  

   Main Characters : Intan ,Ajeng ,Yusti 

   Supporting Characters : All of Characters are active

   Synopsis

  

Funny Interview

     This Story tell about a bunch of teenager who has a job and active in the school extracurricular they are Ajeng,Intan ,Yusti and others .Ajeng was a reporter of school wall magazine one day she needed an information about The Popular Students at the school so she invited Intan ,Yustin and others to make an interview with her.

     The Interview was very funny, silly and full of craziness because they were “Crazy“

 Intan was a designer and Yustin was a drummer and two friends again was a Basket Player .The complication started when Intan called her model to show her design ,the model ate “ Jengkol” so it made a whole the room smell.

     Finally they could solve the smell of “Jengkol” and the last they sang and danced together.

  Speaking English Assignment

  Dennis Agista

  EBII 11220423

   Error Grammatical Of The Story

  

    Actually I couldn’t get any information from the story, I also didn’t understand about this story but I knew the story’s purpose was to entertain the readers.

 I couldn’t analysis the story pattern and grammatical because I think there’s no matter at the story, it’s just for pleasure.

 I think the pronunciation and Grammatical that the players said in this story is the best of all.

Direct Speech

 Direct Speech / Quoted Speech

Saying exactly what someone has said is called direct speech (sometimes called quoted speech)
Here what a person says appears within quotation marks ("...") and should be word for word.
For example:
She said, "Today's lesson is on presentations."
or
"Today's lesson is on presentations," she said.

Indirect Speech / Reported Speech

Indirect speech (sometimes called reported speech), doesn't use quotation marks to enclose what the person said and it doesn't have to be word for word.
When reporting speech the tense usually changes. This is because when we use reported speech, we are usually talking about a time in the past (because obviously the person who spoke originally spoke in the past). The verbs therefore usually have to be in the past too.
For example:

Direct speech	Indirect speech
"I'm going to the cinema", he said.	He said he was going to the cinema.

Tense change

As a rule when you report something someone has said you go back a tense: (the tense on the left changes to the tense on the right):

Direct speech		Indirect speech
Present simple She said, "It's cold."	›	Past simple She said it was cold.
Present continuous She said, "I'm teaching English online."	›	Past continuous She said she was teaching English online.
Present perfect simple She said, "I've been on the web since 1999."	›	Past perfect simple She said she had been on the web since 1999.
Present perfect continuous She said, "I've been teaching English for seven years."	›	Past perfect continuous She said she had been teaching English for seven years.
Past simple She said, "I taught online yesterday."	›	Past perfect She said she had taught online yesterday.
Past continuous She said, "I was teaching earlier."	›	Past perfect continuous She said she had been teaching earlier.
Past perfect She said, "The lesson had already started when he arrived."	›	Past perfect NO CHANGE - She said the lesson had already started when he arrived.
Past perfect continuous She said, "I'd already been teaching for five minutes."	›	Past perfect continuous NO CHANGE - She said she'd already been teaching for five minutes.

Modal verb forms also sometimes change:

Direct speech		Indirect speech
will She said, "I'll teach English online tomorrow."	›	would She said she would teach English online tomorrow.
can She said, "I can teach English online."	›	could She said she could teach English online.
must She said, "I must have a computer to teach English online."	›	had to She said she had to have a computer to teach English online.
shall She said, "What shall we learn today?"	›	should She asked what we should learn today.
may She said, "May I open a new browser?"	›	might She asked if she might open a new browser.

Note - There is no change to; could, would, should, might and ought to.

Direct speech	Indirect speech
"I might go to the cinema", he said.	He said he might go to the cinema.

You can use the present tense in reported speech if you want to say that something is still true i.e. my name has always been and will always be Lynne so:-

Direct speech	Indirect speech
"My name is Lynne", she said.	She said her name was Lynne. or She said her name is Lynne.

You can also use the present tense if you are talking about a future event.

Direct speech (exact quote)	Indirect speech (not exact)
"Next week's lesson is on reported speech ", she said.	She said next week's lesson is on reported speech.

Time change

If the reported sentence contains an expression of time, you must change it to fit in with the time of reporting.
For example we need to change words like here and yesterday if they have different meanings at the time and place of reporting.

Today	+ 24 hours - Indirect speech
"Today's lesson is on presentations."	She said yesterday's lesson was on presentations.

Expressions of time if reported on a different day
this (evening)	›	that (evening)
today	›	yesterday ...
these (days)	›	those (days)
now	›	then
(a week) ago	›	(a week) before
last weekend	›	the weekend before last / the previous weekend
here	›	there
next (week)	›	the following (week)
tomorrow	›	the next/following day

In addition if you report something that someone said in a different place to where you heard it you must change the place (here) to the place (there).
For example:-

At work	At home
"How long have you worked here?"	She asked me how long I'd worked there.

Pronoun change

In reported speech, the pronoun often changes.
For example:

Me	You
"I teach English online."	She said she teaches English online.

Reporting Verbs

Said, told and asked are the most common verbs used in indirect speech.
We use asked to report questions:-
For example: I asked Lynne what time the lesson started.
We use told with an object.
For example: Lynne told me she felt tired.
!Note - Here me is the object.
We usually use said without an object.
For example: Lynne said she was going to teach online.
If said is used with an object we must include to ;
For example: Lynne said to me that she'd never been to China.
!Note - We usually use told.
For example: Lynne told me that she'd never been to China.
There are many other verbs we can use apart from said, told and asked.
These include:-

accused, admitted, advised, alleged, agreed, apologised, begged, boasted, complained, denied, explained, implied, invited, offered, ordered, promised, replied, suggested and thought.

Using them properly can make what you say much more interesting and informative.
For example:
He asked me to come to the party:-

He invited me to the party.

He begged me to come to the party.

He ordered me to come to the party.

He advised me to come to the party.

He suggested I should come to the party.

Use of 'That' in reported speech

In reported speech, the word that is often used.
For example: He told me that he lived in Greenwich.
However, that is optional.
For example: He told me he lived in Greenwich.
!Note - That is never used in questions, instead we often use if.
For example: He asked me if I would come to the party.

Fanfic Gaje

                                     NARUTO SHINGPUDEN  

                         Dennis agista fanfiction

      

                                                                 Fanfiction by :

Dennis Agista

                                           


                                             Chapter 1

                                       

          Jiahahahaha hai readers welcome to dunia fanfic gw yang gaje abis,full of craziness,gajeness,lebayness,alayness and stupidness hehehehe….maklum gw amatir di dunia panpic,jadi bisanya bikin panpic yang abal-abal aja,hwewew… ^_^’ walaupun gaje tapi gapapa deh..don’t like don’t read lah……Ok?

Disclaimer : Masashi kishimoto

Genre         : Romance,tragic,comedy..gaje n campur2 deh…

Pairing     : Naruhina,Sasusaku Gaaminori(Gaara& OC Nishikawa minori,tokoh karangan gw sndri,hehehe it’s me..ngarep bgt sama si Gaara..hehehe..)and all deh…

Author : Nishikawa Nanashe

Judul   :  Naruto Singpuden

Tittle : 4Naruhina: Kau Harusnya memilih aku Jiahahaha….

          : 4Sasusaku: Break Me…(Sakura Ngemis2 ke Sasuke hwehehe..)

          : Gaaminori: Minori,,,just the way You are..Gaara megap2….

Yang jelas fanfic gaje ini  adalah lanjutan dari serial Naruto Shipudden Versi otak fantasi lebay gw...sekali lagi gw tekankan kepada readers...don’t like don’t read...hehehee..emang ada yang mu baca?author sedih..mewek..huhuhu….

 Naruto Shipudden emang punyanya Bang Masashi Kishimoto,tapi… Naruto Singpuden Punyanya Nishikawa Nanashue..hwehehe..

                                       ÆNaruto shipudden By Masashi Kishimoto

Naruto Singpuden by Nishikawa Nanashe

      Chapter 1

      Meet and Greet Sasu and Saku

          Pertemuan Kelima Kage Menghasilkan kesepakatan yang “nihil’’tetapi kelima Negara besar sama-sama mengambil keputusan untuk menangkap criminal nomor wahid  yang menjadi ancaman super bagi kelima Negara besar yaitu Kelompok Akatsuki dan Uchiha Sasuke.Sementara itu dilain tempat Sasuke telah berhasil mengalahkan Danzo…dan ia juga mengorbankan Karin,wanita yang selalu setia mendampinginya demi mengalahkan si tua bangka itu…sungguh teganya-teganya-teganya-teganya-teganya-teganya…Karin menyanyi lagu dangdut itu dalam hatinya sambil menahan sakit di dadanya karena terkena jurus mematikan Sasuke. Sambil terengah-engah Karin berucap…

“Sa…Sa..Sasuke kun…apa a...artinya aku untukmu...? ”kata Karin Lirih sembari menahan rasa sakitnya..air mata tak berhenti keluar dari mata rabunnya #PLAK! (Author digaplok Karin )-_-‘ emang kenyataan kan…kata  author.. .lanjut deh ceritanya....

Sasuke berjalan mendekati Karin sambil tersenyum simpul kepadanya,matanya terlihat memancarkan kebencian dan nafsu untuk membunuh...dengan datar ia berkata......

’’Kau tahu Karin..’’You don’t mean anything to me...kau hanya wanita yang merepotkan’’Lalu ia  bersiap mengeluarkan jurus pamungkasnya berupa pedang yang disamber listrik apa ya namanya gw lupa...hehehe....shiraaah mu peyang..kali..pokonamah itu we...

Ia berniat menghabisi Karin seutuhnya karena wanita itu terlalu banyak mengetahui tentang tahasia Akatsuki,Karin pasrah saja terhadap apa yang akan dilakukan Sasuke si chikkenbut hair itu padanya..dalam hati ia bernyanyi lagi lagu lawas jewel sekarangmah....

’’you could hurt me..with your bare hands..you could hurt me using the sharp end of what you say…but I’m lost to you now,there’s no amount of reason that could save me…so break me..take me…just let me feel your love again….”Karin bersiap menutup matanya,ia tidak ingin melihat mata sasuke yang penuh kebencian itu disaat-saat terakhir hidupnya..Sasuke bersiap mengibaskan pedang listriknya yang bikin orang PLN marah-marah itu (hemat Listrik!)kepada Karin, tetapi tiba-tiba tangannya berhenti mengayunkan pedangnya,ia menoleh karena seseorang dengan suara yang lembut dan merangsang memanggilnya dengan muanjaa…..

’’SASUKE...........!”Suara Sakura memanggil namanya dengan lantang.Sasuke menoleh dan melihat sesosok makhluk yang sangat cantik dengan rambut berwarna pink.kecantikannya  seperti bunga sakura yang telah mekar..ia berlari-lari kecil menuju kearah Sasuke setelah sebelumnya berhasil menumbangkan kedua sahabatnya,Kiba dan Sai diperjalanan dengan biuz no jutsu (emangnya ada gitu?).

Melihat pemandangan itu,sasuke tidak jadi melakukan aksi pembunuhannya terhadap Karin,ia menoleh kearah Sakura dan berjalan kearah gadis itu..........

’’Kau?kenapa kau ada disini,Sakura!?’’tanya Sasuke,sementara karin megap-megap kaya ikan kembung ngambil nafas..dalam hati ia berkata ’’yes gw ga jadi dibunuh..tapi sapa tu cewe?beraninya dia ngedeketin sasuke kun...??’’(-_-’ dasar si karin udah mo dibunuh sama si chikkenbut hair,masih aja ngarepin dia... PRAANG!! author dilempar kacamata karin,langsung pecah kena kepala author).

         Dengan nafas yang terengah-engah Sakura menghampiri Sasuke dan berkata

  ”Sasuke..aku...aku datang mencarimu...aku ingin ikut bersamamu.....bersamamu dengan Akatsuki...’’kata Sakura dengan tegas namun lembut.

’’Benarkah...?sahut Sasuke datar

’’ ya’’ jawab Sakura yang matanya terus memandangi Sasuke,air mukanya tidak lagi seperti dulu ketika ia memandang Sasuke dengan penuh cinta...saat ini ekspresinya kaget dan ketakutan melihat Sasuke,terlebih lagi saat ia memandang matanya yang penuh dengan kebencian...”ia..bukan Sasuke yang dulu..’’ujar Sakura dalam hatinya

’’Kemarilah Sakura....’’Sasuke tersenyum simpul dan mengulurkan tangannya pada gadis berambut merah muda itu...Karin terperangah,tangannya berusaha bergerak mencegah Sasuke menghampiri Sakura,tapi Sasuke langsung men-Sharin-gannya tanpa ampun hingga wanita berkacamata itu terkulai lemas.Sakura membelalakan matanya melihat Sasuke yang men-sharingan Karin tanpa ampun itu.

          Fufufufuf..Sasuke tertawa sinis,suara tawanya terdengar seperti suara almarhum gurunya yang super nista yang mati dibunuh olehnya sendiri...siapa lagi kalau bukan almarhum Orochimaru sensei....

           ’’Sa..sasuke kun...kau membunuhnya?kata Sakura dengan tergagap-gagap.

            ’’So what?emangnya kenapa?Bukannya kamu mau bergabung bersamaku dan menggantikannya di Akatsuki?’’ kata Sasuke datar,tetapi pandangannya masih sama sinisnya seperti tadi...mulutnya tersenyum menyeringai kepada gadis berambut ping itu.

                Sementara Karin masih megap-megap,walaupun sudah terkena Sharin-gan Sasuke,tapi ia masih bisa bertahan,sampai akhirnya ia tidak kuat lagi,matanya tertutup,tetapi ia merasakan ada seseorang yang mengangkat tubuhnya dan membawanya pergi dari TKP,matanya berkedip-kedip,ia sempat melihat sosok seseorang...sosok yang menyebalkan dan selalu dibencinya,siapa lagi kalau bukan Suigetsu,teman bertengkarnya...ia benar-benar tidak menyangka orang yang menyebalkan baginya itu akan menolongnya...sementara Sasuke,orang yang paling disukainya,malah ingin membunuhnya... (end of Karin’s POV )

                 Sasuke semakin mendekat pada Sakura sembari terus mengulurkan tangannya dengan senyum menyeringai,Sakura terlihat ragu-ragu untuk menyambut uluran tangan Sasuke itu,seluruh tubuhya serasa bergetar melihat Sasuke yang seperti itu tetapi akhirnya ia menerima uluran tangan pria bermata onyx itu.

                 Sakura memegang tangan orang yang pernah sangat dicintainya itu,yang sudah bertahun-tahun tidak pernah ia jumpai lagi dan saat ini ada dihadapannya..memegang tangannya,kehangatan yang dulu telah hilang...tangan Sasuke saat ini sangat dingin seperti es,aura tubuhnya penuh dengan kebencian dan dendam.Sasuke merangkulnya,semakin mendekatkan tubuhnya ke gadis berjidat datar itu ( BUGH!! Author ditinju Sakura ...Hehe..pisss sakura...emang kenyataan kan? -_-’)

                   Sasuke mendekap tubuh ninja medic itu.Sakura membiarkannya,ia juga nyanyi lagu break me dalam hatinya....’’ i will meet you in some place,where the light lend itself to softable ( Bener ga seh gini liriknya?author malu2in!) Lanjuttin deh…I will let you undress me..( ini nih yang paling gw apal,haha )but I warn you  I’ve torn like any rose….you could hurt me with your bare hands,you could hurt me using the sharp end of what you say.…but I’m lost to you now… there’s no amount of reason that could save me…so break me..take me..just let me feel your arms again..break me..take me..just let me feel your love agains….( itu kan lagu gw !! si Karin protes ).

                Sasuke memeluk Sakura sambil tersenyum menyeringai,tangan kananya memegang sebuah kunai yang akan ia tancapkan dipunggung Sakura,gadis itu merasakan sesuatu yang aneh pada diri Sasuke yang memancarkan chakra membunuh…Sakura langsung melepaskan tubuh Sasuke dari pelukannya ,tetapi tiba-tiba Sasuke menyerangnya dengan kunai,gadis bermata emerald itu langsung menghindar dengan cepat dan menyerang balik Sasuke.

  “ SHANAROO !! “Sakura mengeluarkan jutsu andalannya

  ” CHIDORI !! ” Sasuke menangkis serangan Sakura dengan chidori

   ”KANAME !! ” Sakura membalas serangan Sasuke,tiba-tiba  pertarungan mereka terhenti,Sasuke bengong kaya orang oon sambil berkata

    ”Emangnya kamu punya jurus yang namanya Kaname no jutsu,Sakura?”

    ”Enggak kok”jawab Sakura datar

    ” Pasti itu jurus baru kamu,kan?”tebak Sasuke

    ” Bukan -_- ”jawab Sakura lempeng

    ” Lalu Apa?? ” tanya Sasuke penasaran

    ”  Itu nama Character cewe di Anime Fullmetal Panic ^_^ ”

  “ Hah???  -_-‘ “ -> Sasuke Expression

  “ Namanya Chidori Kaname ^_^,tadi kan Sasu-kun  bilang ”CHIDORI”yaudah deh Saku lanjutin ”KANAME”jadi CHIDORI KANAME,kan xixixix?” Sakura tertawa seperti kuntilamak(Kuntilanak udah emak-emak).Tiba-tiba Chidori Kaname dari anime Fullmetal Panic muncul

 ”Punteun...aya nu manggil saya?”

  ”Siapa loeh?”Kata Sasuke

  ” Mangga,cari siapa ya teh ” Sahut Sakura ( ni orang Japan apa Sunda seh?)

  ” Sayah nyari Sasuke.....”

   ” Gw Sasuke,lo pasti salah satu fans berat gw kan?”Kata Sasuke dengan PD-nya Sambil mengibas-ngibaskan Chickenbutt hairnya.

    ” Bukan,sayahmah tidak suka lalaki dengan buuk model ayam seperti kamuh,Sasuke yang sayah cari lebih jauh jantan dari kamuh!! ”

    ” GRR...Sialan tuh cewe!”Sasuke geram

    ” Terus teteh teh nyari siapa atuh?da yang namanya Sasuke disinimah cuman yang chickenbutt hair sama si Sasuke Sai aja ”kata Sakura

   ”GRRR.!!! ” Sasuke tambah geram

   ” Sayah nyariin Sasuke Sagaara....”

   ”Ohh..teteh nyariin si Gaara?diamah lagi sibuk jadi Kazekage Sunagakure dan ayeuna keur ririungan jeung para KAGE ”Tutur Sakura

    ” Bukan Kazekage Gaara,neng Sakura...Saya nyariin Sasuke Sagara,my bodyguard di Anime FMP ”  

     ”Oh... nyariin Sanosuke Sagara?nyarinya jangan disini dong eceu...disinimah Anime Naruto Singpuden...kalo nyariin Sanosuke Sagara di Anime Samurai XXX aja ^_^’ ”

      ” Kalian Berdua teh kumaha sih?!dari tadi sayah Ngomong eweuh anu nyambung!!! Saya teh nyariin Sasuke Sagara di Anime sayah Full Metal Panic!! U know? “

     “Oh….”Sahut Sakura dan Sasuke Bersamaan

      ” ^_^  kalian ngerti kan sekarang ?? ”

      ”Hm!” Sakura dan Sasuke mengangguk bersamaan lalu mereka bersiap memperagakan jurus andalannya masing-masing.

      ” Eh..ka..kalian mau apah?? “ Chidori kaname dari fullmetal panic terlihat sangat Panic.

       “ Kalau begitu kembalilah ke alam-mu!“CHIDORI !!!“Sasuke men-chidori-chidori kaname.

        “ SHANAROO!!!“ Sakura juga menyerang bintang tamu itu hingga ia terlontar ke angkasa dan tidak tampak lagi batang hidungnya .

        ’’Dasaaar kalian Sialaaaan !!! AXXXXX !!!! ’’ ( maaf..kasar bgt tu bahasa jadi di sensor) Kata Chidori  Kaname Sambil terbang

Well Chapter 1 ( Satu ) Naruto Singpuden Meet and Greet Sasu and Saku Selesai...... GJ banget ya Ceritanya?? Hehehe maklum yang ngarangnya juga manusia Gaje...hahaha...fic ini bukan bwt dinilai..cuman buat ngenghibur hati Author yang sedang gundah gulana...wkwkw ( lebay mode on ) don’t like?don’t read!

 

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Chapter 2

   Naruto it’s Show time

 

  Dilain tempat Suigetsu sedang membawa Karin dengan bridal style,melompati batang-batang pohon dan semak-semak … ,Karin berpikir betapa so sweetnya orang ini …

 “ ^_^ how so sweet you are Suigetsu….”lalu ia bernyanyi dalam hatinya,lagu Afgan sekarang ”Bawalah pergi cintaku..ajak kemanapun kau mau..jadikan diriku..temanmu paling kau cinta..”

  Tapi tiba-tiba ada Zetsu hitam putih dari akatsuki… Suigetsupun berucap..

 “Gawat… ada Zetsu Twin Gaje dari Akatsuki…Kalau dia Tahu aku menyelamatkan kamu,aku bisa-bisa dibunuh oleh Madara.. “

 “Maksud kamu ? “Karin bertanya  dengan wajah yang Sok Inocent.. #PLAK!(Author dilempar sandal jepit Karin)

 “Farewell..Sayonara”Ucap Suigetsu dengan lirih,lalu ia menjatuhkan Karin dari Pangkuan Tangannya seraya pergi menghampiri Zetsu Twin Gaje

  BRUK! Karin Jatuh Ketanah sambil berucap “AW..Pantatku Sakit..”

Zetsu Twin Gaje menyuruh Suigetsu untuk Langsung membunuh Karin,tapi Suigetsu menolak..”Ga usah dibunuh..Lagian dia udah ga berdaya..udah kena chidori dan Sharingan Sasuke…nanti juga mati sendiri..”Suigetsu mengarang alasan untuk melindungi Karin.

 “Kalau Begitu,Ayo pergi.!Tinggalkan saja wanita tidak berguna ini disini !! Ajak Black Zetsu..

  “Haik!!”Sahut White Zetsu

 “Ok” jawab Suigetsu datar…dan Merekapun pergi meninggalkan Karin yang tergeletak tak berdaya….Sambil merintih Karin berucap…

  “ Da..da…da…DASAR SUIGETSU MANUSIA GAK JELAS!!! >_< “Tenaga terakhirnya terkuras habis untuk teriak-teriak and Guling-guling gak jelas…( -_- ‘)

Setelah marah-marah,teriak-teriak dan guling-guling gak jelas..Karin merasa bosan..mau ngapain dia sendirian di hutan belantara gini…

 “Ah.. mendingan gue balik lagi ke TKP,nontonin orang-orang gelut..daripada gue ngegaje sendirian disini -_-…moga-moga batlenya belum selesai “

Akhirnya Karin memutuskan  Untuk kembali ke TKP tempat pertarungan Sasuke dan Sakura tadi,sambil tertatih-tatih ia berjalan lunglai…”Aku harus kembali ke TKP..kalau enggak nanti Alur cerita Bang Masahi bisa berantakan..gara-gara alurnya diacak-acak sama ni Author Koplak Plagiat ! “#PLAK! Karin dilempar sepatu Highheels author yang baunya… ckckck..^_^ hehehe Author balas dendam sama si Karin…

    Meanwhile di TKP pertarungan antara Sasu and Saku masih berlanjut..setelah gangguan-gangguan berhasil dimusnahkan..pertarungan merekapun dilanjutkan kembali

 Sakura menyerang Sasuke dengan SHANAROO-nya sedangkan Sasuke dengan Shiraa no tenseinya…

                                                    To be Continued..Author udah males ngelanjutinnya…… lanjutanna kapan2 aja Ea…..

    

Direct Speech

 Direct Speech / Quoted Speech

Saying exactly what someone has said is called direct speech (sometimes called quoted speech)
Here what a person says appears within quotation marks ("...") and should be word for word.
For example:
She said, "Today's lesson is on presentations."
or
"Today's lesson is on presentations," she said.

Indirect Speech / Reported Speech

Indirect speech (sometimes called reported speech), doesn't use quotation marks to enclose what the person said and it doesn't have to be word for word.
When reporting speech the tense usually changes. This is because when we use reported speech, we are usually talking about a time in the past (because obviously the person who spoke originally spoke in the past). The verbs therefore usually have to be in the past too.
For example:

Direct speech	Indirect speech
"I'm going to the cinema", he said.	He said he was going to the cinema.

Tense change

As a rule when you report something someone has said you go back a tense: (the tense on the left changes to the tense on the right):

Direct speech		Indirect speech
Present simple She said, "It's cold."	›	Past simple She said it was cold.
Present continuous She said, "I'm teaching English online."	›	Past continuous She said she was teaching English online.
Present perfect simple She said, "I've been on the web since 1999."	›	Past perfect simple She said she had been on the web since 1999.
Present perfect continuous She said, "I've been teaching English for seven years."	›	Past perfect continuous She said she had been teaching English for seven years.
Past simple She said, "I taught online yesterday."	›	Past perfect She said she had taught online yesterday.
Past continuous She said, "I was teaching earlier."	›	Past perfect continuous She said she had been teaching earlier.
Past perfect She said, "The lesson had already started when he arrived."	›	Past perfect NO CHANGE - She said the lesson had already started when he arrived.
Past perfect continuous She said, "I'd already been teaching for five minutes."	›	Past perfect continuous NO CHANGE - She said she'd already been teaching for five minutes.

Modal verb forms also sometimes change:

Direct speech		Indirect speech
will She said, "I'll teach English online tomorrow."	›	would She said she would teach English online tomorrow.
can She said, "I can teach English online."	›	could She said she could teach English online.
must She said, "I must have a computer to teach English online."	›	had to She said she had to have a computer to teach English online.
shall She said, "What shall we learn today?"	›	should She asked what we should learn today.
may She said, "May I open a new browser?"	›	might She asked if she might open a new browser.

Note - There is no change to; could, would, should, might and ought to.

Direct speech	Indirect speech
"I might go to the cinema", he said.	He said he might go to the cinema.

You can use the present tense in reported speech if you want to say that something is still true i.e. my name has always been and will always be Lynne so:-

Direct speech	Indirect speech
"My name is Lynne", she said.	She said her name was Lynne. or She said her name is Lynne.

You can also use the present tense if you are talking about a future event.

Direct speech (exact quote)	Indirect speech (not exact)
"Next week's lesson is on reported speech ", she said.	She said next week's lesson is on reported speech.

Time change

If the reported sentence contains an expression of time, you must change it to fit in with the time of reporting.
For example we need to change words like here and yesterday if they have different meanings at the time and place of reporting.

Today	+ 24 hours - Indirect speech
"Today's lesson is on presentations."	She said yesterday's lesson was on presentations.

Expressions of time if reported on a different day
this (evening)	›	that (evening)
today	›	yesterday ...
these (days)	›	those (days)
now	›	then
(a week) ago	›	(a week) before
last weekend	›	the weekend before last / the previous weekend
here	›	there
next (week)	›	the following (week)
tomorrow	›	the next/following day

In addition if you report something that someone said in a different place to where you heard it you must change the place (here) to the place (there).
For example:-

At work	At home
"How long have you worked here?"	She asked me how long I'd worked there.

Pronoun change

In reported speech, the pronoun often changes.
For example:

Me	You
"I teach English online."	She said she teaches English online.

Reporting Verbs

Said, told and asked are the most common verbs used in indirect speech.
We use asked to report questions:-
For example: I asked Lynne what time the lesson started.
We use told with an object.
For example: Lynne told me she felt tired.
!Note - Here me is the object.
We usually use said without an object.
For example: Lynne said she was going to teach online.
If said is used with an object we must include to ;
For example: Lynne said to me that she'd never been to China.
!Note - We usually use told.
For example: Lynne told me that she'd never been to China.
There are many other verbs we can use apart from said, told and asked.
These include:-

accused, admitted, advised, alleged, agreed, apologised, begged, boasted, complained, denied, explained, implied, invited, offered, ordered, promised, replied, suggested and thought.

Using them properly can make what you say much more interesting and informative.
For example:
He asked me to come to the party:-

He invited me to the party.

He begged me to come to the party.

He ordered me to come to the party.

He advised me to come to the party.

He suggested I should come to the party.

Use of 'That' in reported speech

In reported speech, the word that is often used.
For example: He told me that he lived in Greenwich.
However, that is optional.
For example: He told me he lived in Greenwich.
!Note - That is never used in questions, instead we often use if.
For example: He asked me if I would come to the party.